There it is!
The branch startle,
the ice-pick dart,
the plunge and struggle.There!
The sunset breast,
the test against gravity,
blue-muscled.There! Oh, there!
Water spray light-caught,
fraught on a sleek line,
defining history.You missed it.
This piece was written in January 2017, and I honestly couldn’t tell you why. It’s been used by me as a quick piece for the Allographic open mic “Chaos Round” (where, for an unspecified amount of time an unspecified number of poets dash to the stage – physical or virtual – and give us tiny poems, fragments of pieces, mysterious fillips, then retreat) a few times, and, as they say, I just think it’s neat. As a child I did a lot of birdwatching, even had my own binoculars, and I’m still that person who’ll stop on a walk or stare out of a car window at interesting avifauna (sometimes to the consternation of the people in the passenger seats, it has to be said…). I have, however, never seen a kingfisher in person.
A common kingfisher, drawn from a picture by John Bridges |
This was a lot of fun to draw, but took me significantly longer to get around to starting than I’d have liked, probably because it seemed so very daunting a prospect to do justice to. However, once I’d got going, it took me significantly less time than anticipated to draw. I’m clearly learning… However, the source photo cropped the tail, so I’m very much hoping I did it justice!
Look out for this and its Lesser Spotted friends in Spectral later this year!
I have seen a kingfisher, many years ago, and this is a great evocation - even if you've seen it, it's so fast you've still missed it! Lovely pic. Hope you're well Fay. :-)
ReplyDeleteOh wow, how cool! And thanks, RTJ - that means a lot. Hope you're well.
DeleteI have your postcard if this. It’s gorgeous! A good place to see them is on the river in St Ives near where I live. They sit for periods on branches as you drift past in the electric( silent) boat that goes on mini cruises downriver.
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